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bipolar blues

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Bipolar blues

I soar above cloud nine
I’m up so high
I yell and laugh and no one hears
I’m high above all woe
I’m happy
Oh so happy

I kick towards the seas surface
The pressure crushing and squeezing
I yell and scream and no one hears
I’m pinned by my self-loathing
I’m tragic
Oh so tragic

I’m in the midway
I can go on
I will go on
Tomorrow will be better
Tomorrow we see my downfall
I’d love to be midway
Always midway
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WithinTheEssence6-6's avatar
thats really good :)

the middle part doesnt sound immature it sounds really good and basically perfect.